Holding Your Future In Your Hand




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By far the most important technological invention to benefit society is the development of the laptop. I don’t think anything else provides more information on things going on around the world or in your own life than the laptop. It is the twin invention of the desktop computer, it provides internet and you can keep up with mail that doesn’t come straight to your house, ‘m referring to email people use email to get information everyday. The laptop is reliable because they are mobile you can bring them with you on business trips. You can use them anywhere the only thing you really need is a charger. It is quick so you can get fast access anywhere at almost anytime. Police who them while working in their car to locate people or look at your tags. They have even placed them in schools so that kids can use them

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Even though things that have come before the laptop still remain reliable sources the laptop is in my opinion on the top of the list.
Laptops these days have proved to be an easier way to receive email. Instead of going out and looking for a job by going to the corner store and picking up a newspaper. You can stay home and or even while you’re e drinking coffee in a diner you can just pull out your laptop with out going through all the trouble. You are able to by tings on the internet really easy. With a laptop its makes it a few steps faster you can do it anywhere. If you are always on the move and it’s to get home to do things online. The laptop was made the way so that you didn’t have to.

That was one way the laptop helped civilization.
Another way that the laptop helped civilization was portability you can bring it anywhere. Laptops have been made to be able to bring with you to places that you would never think of. They have been made in all sorts of varieties and built to do anything. Away that it is good and built to do anything are they can even go on airplanes. They are even able to walk around with and they can do some pretty amazing things. People love to bring things with them on the run and that is one thing they would grab. The laptop is the way when you’re on your way on the road somewhere you can locate anything.
Another way that the laptop has helped the world today is the fact that they are being used in schools now.

Kids who graduate from high school and are going to college. That is on the top of the list of thing they need to be ok in college. It is a way that they can keep in touch with them peers and even those professors. It is easy to get work done and not have to write everything with your hands. Technology has caught up to us Americans and we cant help but to use it. To have a laptop now days is to be somebody. That was away that the invention of the laptop helps people.

To conclude this essay all the ways that the laptop helped us it also can hurt us in the long run. While global warming is in effect. In a way laptops were the best inventions to ever be thought of used. Laptops have been a help for people of all natures and personalities. The future of the laptop is huge it has even turned into cell phone. There is even getting into a little competition with its competitors. There are all sorts of laptop companies from Dell to Apple. Thanks for listening and hopefully one day you to can own a laptop.

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One Response to “Holding Your Future In Your Hand”

  1.   ritajeanstangherlin Says:

    Ron,

    Don’t use slang: “kids” or “”m” for I’m. a typo? -2

    P5: To conclude this essay all the ways that the laptop helped us it also can hurt us in the long run. While global warming is in effect.
    1. Don’t tell us you are concluding (to conclude), just do it. I’m also not sure what you are doing with the global warming mention–a fragment -5

    “Thanks for listening and hopefully one day you to can own a laptop.” don’t do this; don’t thank your reader, just conclude -1

    I’m not sure what the code is supposed to show me; you need to work in html to have the code show. You also have some spacing issues, where paragraphs begin and sentences, but overall, a good essay. -5

    No EC.

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